Developing Documents

This section describes how to develop written documents summarizing your findings from the PHA process. It describes the common elements you must include in these documents and how to format this information. It also describes how to use information mapping techniques to help identify the key messages to share with readers and create documents that meet 508-accessibility requirements.

The PHA process can result in several types of written documents, depending on the site-specific circumstances and community needs. These documents include a public health assessment (PHA), a health consultation (HC), a letter health consultation (LHC), an exposure investigation-health consultation (EI-HC), a health advisory (HA), or a technical assist (TA). The documents have different audiences, preparation times, and requirements (refer to the Typical Information for Your Documents table below).

FEATURED RESOURCE

ATSDR’s Public Health Assessments, Health Consultations, and Supporting Information

This ATSDR website provides published documents such as PHAs and HCs. You can search for documents by state and ATSDR region. While these released documents can be useful to review, remember that every site is different.

Typical Information for Your Documents

Who is Involved in the PHA Process
Document Details Public Health Assessment Health Consultation Letter Health Consultation Exposure Investigation-Health Consultation Health Advisory Technical Assist
Level of resources needed Medium to high Low, medium, or high Low to medium High High Generally low
Preparation time Months to years Months to years Weeks to months Months to years Weeks to months Days
Target audience Varied Varied Specific requestor Varied EPA Individual (requestor)
Public comment release required Yes Varied No No No No
Contains public health conclusions Yes Yes Yes Maybe Yes No (might have recommendations)
Used as a site evaluation tool Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes No
Accompanied by separate document summary/fact sheet Yes Yes No Yes No No

Content Guidelines for Your Documents

ATSDR has developed a document outline [PDF – 217 KB] [DOC – 39 KB] that lays out suggested content and structure for each of your documents. These are designed to foster consistency and completeness in the written products, while giving flexibility to health assessors in preparing site-specific documents.

Communicating your conclusions in an organized, clear, and concise way is equal in importance to conducting a scientifically sound evaluation. As you prepare a document, you will make many choices about how to organize material within each section, how much detail to provide, whether to use a question-and-answer format in various sections, and so on. Using information mapping techniques will also help you organize the content for your document.

Keep in Mind

Write the Summary, Conclusions, Recommendations, and PHAP sections in plain language. The Summary and Conclusions need to be concise and presented in information mapping format. Use clear writing techniques to prepare the remaining technical sections of the document.

Access the most up-to-date Document Outline [PDF – 217 KB] [DOC – 39 KB] , Brief PHA Process Summary [PDF – 107 KB] [DOC – 26 KB] , and Full PHA Process Explanation [PDF – 292 KB] [DOC – 50 KB] .

Refer to NCEH/ATSDR Health Communication Playbook for resources to help create effective materials.

The main body of the document should fully address pertinent issues. Use appendices as appropriate to provide more detailed technical discussions and tables, figures, and maps whenever possible to make it easier to understand written text. Of utmost importance is to clearly reference all information sources. The primary document sections are briefly outlined below and all laid out in ATSDR’s document Outline [PDF – 217 KB] [DOC – 39 KB] . Health assessors need to refer to the document Outline [PDF – 217 KB] [DOC – 39 KB] for instructions on compiling and summarizing the different information collected throughout the PHA process and incorporating it into your documents.

Summary

The summary provides a brief introduction of the site, describes why ATSDR evaluated the site and what ATSDR did at the site, and presents conclusions, the basis for each conclusion, and next steps. The summary is the most frequently read section of the document. It needs to use plain language that is as simple, clear, and concise as possible. Be sure to use bottom line statements that provide the basis for the conclusions and highlight key evidence that supports the findings.

The table below shows the information mapping framework. Each conclusion should be listed separately and followed by its Basis for Conclusion and Next Steps. Health assessors have the option to list all of the Next Steps as one section after stating all the conclusions with their respective basis for the conclusions. If this option is chosen, be clear which step relates to which conclusion.

Information mapping framework

Conclusion #1

What ATSDR found

Basis for Conclusion

Evidence and support for each conclusion

Next Steps

Recommendations and actions as follow-up to document release

For More Information

ATSDR contact information

Key Questions to Address in the Summary

Background

This section includes two subsections.